Improvement's Wich Will Be Made To Rough Cut

There are many improvements I shall make on my rough cut from the feedback I recieved. The things I shall change to my rough cut will therefore improve my magazine and make my final magazine better in the end.

Front Cover

Feedback I recieved about the front cover, was mainly to improve the main image, stick to two or three fonts and change around the positioning of the text. Things I will change....

Change the image as this was not the photo I wanted as my main image on the front cover in the first place. When I took them its started to rain and was freezing cold therefore prevented me to get the images I wanted. So will take my images again and change the whole of my front cover. With the image going to be different the positioning of the text will therefore change which was something which needed improveing anyways. I shall also change the fonts and stick to three, to make sure it doesnt look over crowded and messy.

Content Page

The feedback I recieved about the content page was that the images were all too similar, also there was too many page numbers and that these could be cut down. Things I will change....

I will first of all get a few different models and take some new photos and get a better variety of images to place onto my content page, this will give it a better proffesional look. Also will change and delete some certain pages off the content page as people said it looked over crowded and had too many on. I am happy with how my content page is laid out however the one main thing I need to change are images.

Double Page Spread

My double page spread got feedback saying that the questions need to standout more and the titles could be more stylish. Also to go over and proof read the article. Things I shall change....

Something I will defiantly do is make the questions standout more as they just blend in with the rest of the text. I might also change the fonts to the questions and the article. Something I might also change is the titles to the article as someone said they need to be more stylish and this is something i took on board and might change. The image is going to have to be photoshopped again as i wasnt happy with the way it turned out and could be better. Overall the layout of the double page spread is someting i will stick to and just tweak around it.